in the period
when time
stood still
the old man
grasped
for a memory
a mislaid
memory
somewhere …
in the recesses …
an old mind
he thought
I am
an old mind
full up
with clutter
a workshop
overfilled with boxes
and jars of screws
and nails
and bolts
and tools
and
memories
finally
as he sat
apparently doing nothing
in the chair
that was situated
to allow a view
through the long
kitchen window
out into the garden
he felt it
a sensation
the soft perfume smell
of a rose
the sound of the hammer
descending to strike
the anvil
the yielding
of a bowl of cream
as he ran his finger through it
the knocking hollow
of a loaf of bread
just out of the oven
the …
and suddenly
time started
again
as he
recalled
~
Poem #492 from a series of poems drawn from the imagination and collected as: a Bachelard reverie.
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I concur …
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Kind of sad but accurate to that state of mind, Frank. I thought the crossings out worked really well.
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Weird and wonderful, Steve. I’ve often played the game of wondering what I would be without this mind that I currently have. Nothing, of course, but still something t play with.
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Lovely, so much hope.
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Thank you.
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Very neat
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Thanks Derrick. The mind is an amazing thing across the journey.
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So powerful, Frank. I really enjoyed this stuttering memory taking snapshots through time. What an amazing way to travel along with the old mind. Loved it.
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Thank you, Diane. These Bachelard inspired poems took me off to places I hadn’t anticipated or imagined visiting.
Glad you enjoyed.
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