D. Wallace Peach (Diana) over at Myths of the Mirror has put up a Speculative Fiction writing prompt for the month of February, featuring a picture of an elephant in close proximity to a tree which itself contains a house full of mice.
I wrote a response to this prompt a few days back. Mostly the poem reveals the attitude of the elephant. Take a peek here, if you’d like.
It occurred to me, however, that mice are not passive creatures, and certainly would have something to say in their own defense. Consequently, I revisited the situation to listen in on mouse strategy.
Hear this!
we
who are the mice
we know
an elephant
at our house
will blow
like a storm
that comes
from a nether place
the breath
from his trunk
filling
all of our space
and even though
even though
there is peril
right there
we keep our counsel
we
do not despair
for our hearts are strong
while our tree
still stands
though the elephant
keeps us
in fate’s
tight hands
so come on
all you mice
now
let us sing
let us play
let us
dance
for even elephants must like
to waltz
and
to prance
clasp my hand
oh
elephant do
I would like to take
a turn
with you
yes
I would love to take
my turn
(with you!)
~
I am a part of this! It’s a wonderful moment.
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Strategic diversion Cage.
Who can resist a little dancing?
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Or watching the dance, around the fire, as the warriors sing and chant …
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Yes, that’s a strong and dreamy image.
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Aww. This gave me such a smile. What a lovely response to the elephant’s humphing. Ha ha. Loved it.
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Perhaps the elephant will dance. Smiles.
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Hélène, surely he will be tempted, and his mood mellowed! We shall hope.
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AH! Wonderful! I think the elephant will take up the offer of a dance, perhaps balancing some of the mice on his trunk.
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I’m ready to buy a ticket to see that, Anne.
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Oh, those clever mice… 🙂 Surely elephants love to dance!
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Let’s hope, Bette.
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Go Mice!
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Dancing so close to valentines quite frankly is a must.
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hehehe beware, Ellen. They’re cheeky little sods. I wouldn’t trust them.
Then again, I’m more a candidate for the elephant role, I suspect.
Glad you enjoyed and thanks for the visit!
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You did good Frank. I had fun with this prompt
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Yes, the mice should have a say on anything. Very n…mice!
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LOL. True, so true.
Thank you, Miriam.
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Haha, Frank, let me see what my mice have to say. Too bad that I’m not fond of mice. Just have to pretend that I’m reading the fairy tale to students or my granddaughter!
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Go those Meeces, Miriam. CHeers.
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I saw a tiny dot of the story!
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The mental image of mouse and elephant waltzing is rather challenging! I like the mice’s attitude in this story. If you can’t beat ’em, join ’em!
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Cheers, Kaz.
The mice are resilient. Hadn’t thought about the imagery of it, but I think the fact that the mice are undaunted tells the tale. A ‘Can do’ attitude is important.
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Mice Rule!
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🙂 Now a poem for the tree!
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Yes, I could see that, Chelsea. Two is enough for the mo, though I recently read of an anthology of short stories all beginning with the same line. I like that as an idea.
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It’s a good idea! I think I’d want to gnaw my own leg off if they were TOO similar, but I’m sure a poet like you could pull it off without that irritation. 🙂
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Well done. A big smile crossed my face as I read it.
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They’re unstoppable, Robert. Glad you enjoyed.
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Thank you.
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This was a treat, Frank.
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Thank you, Anne. I’m delighted you enjoyed the piece.
It was a great image to write to.
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Yes, it sure was. I was tempted, but chickened out. Maybe next time. Anyway, I enjoyed your “mouse” POV.
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🙂
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I’ve always liked mice with grit!
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Smart, too, Jackie!
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Love it! 🙂
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Hi Bette.
It seems to have come out well, and I’m delighted you enjoyed reading the response from these little mischiefs.
One never knows what they might do.
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