I could have kept the old car
that I knew so well
it and I had travelled
through all the middle years of my life
with my tools in the back
ladder up on top
and my mind running ahead
to the next job
or taking my wife and the kids
to go visiting
five hundred miles in a stretch
or more
this family’s spread a long way
with the passing of years
but every thing has it’s time
and now my breath comes hard
I don’t work too much
and the old machine
that’s been a part of me
had started to rattle when I cranked it over
dropping spots of oil
and letting water in where I know
no water should be
there’s a time that comes
for everything
but I don’t understand
the new car is
in every way
a smaller one
so why do I feel I could hide a small family
in the trunk
I was sitting in the driveway in neutral
while I read page ten of the manual
when a flashing sign told me off
for not being in park
seems like there’s a button for this
and a button for that
a hundred and ten small motors
for the windows
for the mirrors
for the aerial
and for who the hell knows what
when I tried to move the car just a foot or two
before I closed the driver’s side door
well
I swear
you’d have thought I must have broken
it’s mother’s leg
I didn’t get a beep of warning
it was more like a scream of fright
I know I’m getting old
but I didn’t think I needed nanny-ing yet
so I sit out in the car
parked inside my garage
holding the keys tight in my hand
wondering what to do
once upon a time the car was mine
and it went exactly where I drove it
now I feel watched and judged
constrained until permission
is flashed and granted
don’t get me wrong
it’s a fine machine
loaded with personality
and when I go for a drive
I feel I could save the whole planet
on my own
a fellow rang me up
said he was looking to buy
my old jalopy from the dealer
what was my opinion
did I think it was worth the cash
I said
mate
oh mate
I think you ought to grab it
it’s a wonderful old beast
simple to drive
simple to repair
it’s a car you can understand
mate
I said
oh mate
I think a part of me grew old
the day I let it go
© Frank Prem, 2009
I understand completely!
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Delightful in every way, Frank! Like him, I love my new car (or at least that what l keep telling myself) but something in me longs for the old one I let go…at least it went to my son who desperately needed it…still, I wonder if it thinks of me from time to time.
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Funny how objects – like a car – become kin with our self identities.
We are odd creatures, Arris.
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Indeed.
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