I sat upon the shore
Fishing, with the arid plain behind me
~
from the desert
to
the sea
the mysterious vastness
to the vast
mystery
all of life
is
a cycle
and every wheel must
turn
it is not
a choice
but lies within
its nature –
its very wheel-ness –
to do so
each turn
reveals
a newness
of aspect
a new facet
from the desert
to the sea
opposing vastness
competitive mystery
all
turns
of the wheel
~
on the derelict pier
looking out
across the water
a grizzled sailor
has fixed his eyes
on a storm
out
toward the horizon
there is
a colour
and
a sensation
that speaks of
portent
and he cannot
shift
his gaze
something
is occurring
and the glass
is dropping
as though
for storm
as though
for typhoon
or hurricane
as though . . .
something
is coming
and with each
falling
millibar
the feeling of oppressive
expectation
rose
with it the
almost inaudible sound
of a whale
singing
~
The imagery here is fantastic Frank Your style has a delicate balance of wisdom and fantasy Often I need to read the verse twice to fully comprehend this balance Psychologically I am aware that I have to concentrate on the words, but relax enough to imagine the scene. I guess today’s poem brought my thoughts together
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Thank you, CLaire. That was #299. #00 done now, and the project – this part of it, anyway – draws near a close.
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well done Frank!
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Thanks Claire. A big effort over 12 months plus. I’m pleased.
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The turns of phrase in this poem are wonderful — “the mysterious vastness to the vast mystery,” “competitive mystery,” “all turns of the wheel” — and the singing whale is a masterful touch!
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Thank you, Janet. It’s good to know that the language of the poem works ok. It’s sometimes hard to tell.
Glad you enjoyed.
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That final verse is magical
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Thank you. Derrick. The song keeps recurring as a theme.
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