life is an equation
of sorts
iteration
on iteration
never much closer
to a solution
but the attempt
must be made
or die
looking back
sees the poor fool
believing
in his own
purpose
iterating
despite
or because
of what is being done
around him
by others
to others
to him
the present is
securely more complete
and need cause
no bother
but
the temptation
to wallow
in the distress
of being so . . .
unformed
is seductive
and
for a short time
a naïve fool
is iterating
again
~
*I’m not sure if this and the last poem (hissst!) will make the cut. It is tricky to find what feels like a satisfactory opening into this section of the work.
It looks good to me
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Thanks Derrick. I’ll keep playing with it.
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I’d say go with your gut on making the decision.
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I will. It’s no big thing, just a little creative dilemma. I’ll keep writing till I’m happy with it I
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I know how that works!
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