
‘Father Time’ – a portrait of George Prem at his work, by Leanne Murphy, 2018.
A small collection of poems written about, or for my dad, George Prem over the years.
George passed away today, March 30th 2020.
the clock man
the storm-water gutters on the house next door
are ticking contractions
like a timepiece with a stutter
………………………………………………..tick tick tick
tick
…………tick tick tick tick
the early night is cold
the old man resident in his workshop
a place that is never silent
the closing door raises a soft clang
as the clocks lining the walls
acknowledge his presence
…………………………………………….on the hour
………………………….on the half hour
……………………………………………………on every fifteenth minute
chimes are sonorously struck
the cuckoo calls clear and raucous
above the serene harmonics
of mantle pieces
…………………………………………….carriage clocks
…………four-hundred-day twirlers
…………………………aged grandfathers
and the whir
of naked mechanisms
exposed for test and confirmation
that no moment has been lost
fifty distinct ticks in this room
individually discernible
if time is taken
…………………………to separate
……….the rhythm of each
…………………………………………….as it passes
order is drawn from an initial aural chaos
a comfort found
in the sedate movement of time
within the workshop of the clock-man
and the staccato punctuation
of metal guttering on a neighbors house
……………………………stuttering
…………in the chill
……………………………………..of early night
c 2001
george’s accommodations
in the loam that is his garden
george is scratching
he has a curled three-prong rake in his hands
to break the soil
he’s worked this same dirt over
for years
summer
green and lush
vibrant climbers
winter
the slow white
of cauliflower
embedded pebbles fleck the black
before he roughs it with his prongs
necessary disturbance
to allow rain
to expose the roots
of any weed
left un-taken by his work
~
george is scratching
in the small square
that is his garden
in the back-yard
beside the hens
and other birds he has housed
throughout his life
in the loam
the dark black earth
he is creating another accommodation
for things to grow
c 2008
of lying still and colour
I used to ride each morning
around the places I’d set my traps
to collect a handful of scrawny bunnies
I’d go out to check them
before anyone else had risen
I slipped a foot off the pedal one day
when I was wearing thongs
tore my toes on bitumen
I turned the bike around
went home
put myself and the damage to bed
I pretended that
if I didn’t move
I wouldn’t feel any pain
I lay very still until she found me there
around lunchtime
~
ma looks grey on the bed
she’s beeping every couple of seconds
has so many tubes sticking out
it looks like they’ve had to hook up her feet
to get a reading of low blood pressure
she’s drifting in and out of consciousness
lying very still
and one eye’s weeping
I wipe it with a handkerchief
but it still looks shiny
puffed up and moist
she doesn’t really know
hasn’t noticed
she speaks a half-coherent line
about pain control not working well before
but it’s fine now
and the surgeon breezed through a while ago
she can’t recall what he told her
but it must be ok
she thinks that’s what he said
~
I found crystals on the street
when I was young
odd shapes that drew my attention
with flat sides as sheer as glass
I’d hold their smoky clarity
pointed at the sky towards the sun
thought I might get a glimpse
of the colours that lay beyond
but the best I ever managed was opaque
~
pa and me are sitting quiet
in disparate corners
when we came back from lunch
she was seriously sleeping
we look at each other
from across the room
know there’s little either of us can do
he’ll wash out her nighties
and I’ll go back to work in another town
he says they should be ok now
the worst was not knowing the result
and now it’s more about endurance and willpower
he says he’ll keep some colour in the garden
that might be important he thinks
when she comes home
c 2016
way poem #5: the five steps to wheaten pecks
he progresses
five steps at a time
to reach a wall
a <a href=”https://fivedotoh.com/2018/10/11/fowc-with-fandango-fence/” target=”_blank” rel=”noopener”>fence</a>
that he can lean on
air that tastes
so sweet
is hard these days
to come by
a moment of rest
till the gasps calm down
to regular breathing
then
five steps more
and five steps more
again
it’s important to keep moving
even though the atmosphere
is so thin
down here
on planet earth
and the small brown hen
the last remaining hen
is waiting
she has no flock
to be part of
they have passed away
one by one
to a cat
to a fox
to a feather depleting
decrepitude
and now she waits
for the shuffle
of him
beside the yard gate
in her nest
is an egg
he sits beside her laying box
on a chair he placed
some time ago
to one side
in his hand
a covered palm
of golden wheat
she dainty steps
until she can stand
upon him
on his knees
to take each grain
one peck
one peck at a time
until they’re gone
and then she leaves him
and goes to forage the yard
again
and he
can take his five steps
all the way back
to the rest
of his life
c 2016
A very fine tribute set, Frank. Descriptive, tender, poetry with a splendid portrait. Of all the excellent lines I have to highlight this one: ’embedded pebbles fleck the black’.
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Derrick, thank you. I think he was ready, and I’m glad I at least attempted to represent him in words while he was still around.
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I have to echo Derrick. A very fine tribute indeed.
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Thanks Mick. He was a character who needed to be memorialised in these ways, I think.
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Beautiful Frank and my condolences.
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Thank you, Cheryl.
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I am so sorry for your loss, Frank. So very sad that the times do not permit an appropriate send-off for your dad, but perhaps he would prefer it that way ..
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No more than ten, including celebrant and Undertakers representatives, I believe. Another time, it would have been a couple of hundred, I think. Ah well.
Thank you so much, Tracy. Appreciated.
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Frank, I am so sorry for your loss. These are lovely works in your dad’s memory and Father Time is a wonderful portrait.
Wishing you and Leanne peace,
Ellen
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Thank you, Ellen. The portrait was done in pastel, with objects and parts from his workshop. His retirement years were spent, in part, as a self taught clock repairer.
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I’m sorry that you lost your father, but a finer tribute to him I can’t imagine.
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Hi Fandango. Thank you so much.
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So sorry to hear Frank. Thoughts are with you.
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Thank you, Ted. These are strange milestones in a life.
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Lovely tributes to your Father. My sympathy for your loss.
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Thank you so much, Anne.
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My deepest condolences, Frank. Words are never enough, it seems, but your words give us a moment.
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Thanks Cage. He leaves a big hole in our small universe.
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Oh, Frank, I am so sorry to hear of your dad’s death. Please accept my condolences. Your poetry is a loving tribute to the man he was.
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Thanks Liz. A big life moment.
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Yes. I lost my dad twenty years ago.
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Sorry to hear, Liz. Time doesn’t change some things. My sister and I were speculating about new found orphan status. When do we stop thinking in such ways? Not sure we will.
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No, I don’t think we do stop thinking in such ways. I know I haven’t.
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Sorry to hear about your loss Frank. These poems are a very moving tribute x
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Thank you, John.
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A moving collection.
Regards Thom
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Thank you, Thom. He was a character who lent himself to commemoration. A good subject.
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May he rest in peace.
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We’ll try to help him make it so, Thom.
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Our condolences. It’s a fine tribute.
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Thank you. He was a llarger than life character.
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