it’s a pretty little town here we are on main street the municipal offices rise proud halfway down the block that shop there is the newsagent across the road the pharmacy six days a week bakery buns are a treat they do pink lamingtons on every major corner there’s a pub this town has a thirst you know and the gardens (memorial) are a hundred and fifty years old bunya pines with their prickle leaves rise up into the sky the next street down has the oldest houses weatherboard walls tin roofs on a quarter acre elm trees are the civic pride and the streets are long paved with bitumen the kids can play on the forest reserve like their parents did and theirs before them kids can play like they always could they will play around here I think forever | this used to be a town you can see this was a main street all the patches the ash patches were buildings once you can see what was the main drag and what’s left of where the shops were twisted tin a few bricks wisps rising from suspicious looking mounds they could be anything I believe they had a long line of old trees here you can see it’s a sort of rectangle of about an acre nothing there now so I might be wrong all the way along this road the tar has melted schools are gone all the old houses this is a war zone with nothing left but discoloured rectangles of around about a quarter acre the forest those few sticks there is still smouldering I suppose they must have let it grow too close no problem now though it is gone for good |
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Apocalyptic
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Yes. Too many towns.
It’s evening here as I write and we’ve just been blanketed with soup from fires 50k away from here and more.
We have all the smoke in all the world at the moment.
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Like is so inadequate
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Thank you, Derrick.
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Amazing side-by-side images. So sad!
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Yes, the before and after treatment I see so often in photographs. Very grim.
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It’s very effective. Devastating.
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How sad a poem. I’m so sorry for all of you and the country
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Thank you, C. It’s a surreal period of time.
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A poignant way to set out the words. Unbearable to think of such a town lost.
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The kind of thing I dwell on these days.
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😢 Words fail me.
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Thank you, Anne. There is not much to like in such imagery, but I feel compelled.
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I know the feeling. Words seem so inadequate a response.
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I can’t Like the horror you’re describing, but I like the skillful way you’ve done it, and the way you’ve arranged the “before and after” verses.
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Yes, it’s not nice at all, is it?
I wanted to try to catch the potential consequence. What does my place look like, now. What does a devastated place look like after.
It feels necessary, but definitely not nice.
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