one more (to be made)

Inspired by the phrase ‘And for a hundred visions and revisions ‘ taken from ‘The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock’ by T. S. Eliot.
This now comprises a part of The Linkages Project

so I look
deeply
until only the lines
remain

the words are all blurred
past their meanings

and yet
I look deeper
in case

just in case

there may be
a thing
even after
a hundred revisions

a hundred
reviews

it may be
it is not right

it may be I
am not right

it may be there is something
yet
I should change

for what I want
is
perfection

what I need is
just so
and just right
and
just

oh
I don’t know
sometimes
what I’m seeking
anymore

I feel that it should be
but
I’m not sure that
I’ll know

and I suppose
at a point
set in time
I must stop

I suppose
there’ll be a point
when no point
remains

but always
I believe
I will wonder

was there one vision
more
one
re-vision more
that I could have done
and
one difference
more
to be made

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