if I
were to analyze
the world
I would begin
with water
running like laughter
over stones
at my feet
I would begin
with air
filling me up
with sky
the taste of a cloud
with every breath
I take
I would begin
with
the earth
brown dirt
I hold in my hands
the smell that will be
green
growing things
the beating of a heart
in the shape
of a garden
I would end
with fire
rising
dancing
writhing
in the joy of life
released
veiled
unveiled
I would analyze
the flame’s dance
across a log
I would end
in flame
~
Poem #503 from a series of poems drawn from the imagination and collected as: a Bachelard reverie.
Marvellous take on the elements
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I really enjoyed where Bachelard took me, Derrick.
Interestingly, at this stage at least, I can’t find the same inspiration when I try to read him again.
A strange confluence of inspiration and creativity.
Glad I was there at the time.
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::smiling:: very nice
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🙂
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A dream it seems
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Yes. An elemental dream.
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Wonderful!! I’ll have to answer the flame.
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Glad you liked it, Chelsea. 🙂
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