the water does not need
to move
to move me
it is enough
to gaze on it
sky-reflected
un-rippled
un-wavered
I see the trees
twice
the ducks that pass
are friendly strangers
wary of me
but hopeful
as I
am hopeful
they move on
and
I am moved
I too
move on
~
Poem #448 from a series of poems drawn from the imagination and collected as: a Bachelard reverie.
Cool piece! đŸ™‚ We are mostly made of water.
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Nice. Felt like the rhythm of water.
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Thank you Mark. It’s remarkable when words on the page can interact with the senses or through imagery. I so enjoy that happening. Really glad you liked the piece.
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Poetry has that power. Have a peaceful holiday.
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Thanks Mark. You too.
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Great opening continuing well
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Than,sk Derrick.
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