he came
searching
for a drink
not really so very much
to seek
cola
lemonade
orange juice
even water
in a glass
if it came to it
any store
on the street
could surely
have obliged him
but
one by one
slightly ahead of him
as he walked
they each shut their doors
drew the shutters
his thirst
remained un-quenched
as he slowly flamed
a path
down Main Street
something about him
made good people
hesitate
and the heat he raised
did not assist the impression
they formed of him
it’s hard to help
a man
so much on fire
without yourself
becoming burned
as he walked
in a kind of stagger
smoldering footprints
continued to burn around the edges
highlighting the way that he had come
into the town
three curious boys gathered around
to examine one
poking at it
with a stick
though they remained
well behind the man
and his hotter
more recent steps
it was a small child
in the end
a young girl
who ran out
in front of him
to place a glass
of water into his path
and while the town
watched
he paused
leaned over
to pick up the glass
to drink
the clear
cool vitae
of fresh water
he bent towards it
and collapsed
into grey ash
and smoke
and smolder
~
Poem #334 from a series of poems drawn from the imagination and collected as: a Bachelard reverie.
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Whoa! That’s what you call thirsty!
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You got a spare drop?
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Wow
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A bit hot, this one.
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Hi Frank. When you post on Fandango’s prompt do your pingbacks show up right away or is there a delay? I never seem to pingback and comments are closed. I usually send them to “contact me” and they usually but not always show up. I’ve inquired from Fandango, but never hear back so thought I’d consult with another follower of the prompt. If this is just normal, I’ll stop worrying.. Enjoyed your poem. Judy
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Oops, sorry… I meant on Word of the Day. Too many prompts….they get mixed up in yer head!!!! Well, in my head.
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Yes Judy. I generally can see my pingbacks on the target site straightaway. I post or re-post the poem. Wait till the refresh of mine to confirm, then refresh the target to see that it has arrived.
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Mine have not been showing up. So frustrating..and they never answer my queries. Might have to give up on it. Haven’t checked lately…perhaps it is there. Thanks, Frank.
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Spoke too soon. It’s there now. Oh joy, oh joy.
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