Poem #251 from a series of poems drawn from the imagination and collected as: a Bachelard reverie.
Back to Bachelard and me – Introduction
Gray saw the world
in monochrome
shoes and pants
hair and skin
and eyes
he was Gray
all around him
shades of
one
trees and grass
hills and sky
the clouds
they were always
grey
but on the street
there was an ink-shop
the spruiker sang:
fill you up
with just a touch
just a touch
fill you up
with what you haven’t got
you’re Gray man
but if I fill you up
you don’t have to be
grey
man
one morning
he walked inside
told the spruiker
he was so
weary
of his outlook
then
iris needle
iris shades
iris rainbow
iris changed
Gray walked out
his eyes were hued
in green and red
blue
yellow and violet
and the world
that had been all
Gray knew
was not there
wherever he looked
all he saw
when he looked
all there
was in colour
© Frank Prem 2018
Bachelard and me Poem #252: all included
Wowww this was amazing. Umm I think I want to share this for Fiber Friday I just haven’t decided if I’d share other poets yet! Isn’t this published?
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Hi PP.
First appearance here, this morning. So it’s ‘that’ kind of published, now.
Glad you’ve enjoyed the piece. It’s a bit of an odd one.
If you’d like to share it elsewhere, I’m fine with that.
Thank you.
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