the scale-feather concept

Poem #218 from a series of poems drawn from the imagination and collected as: a Bachelard reverie.

Back to Bachelard and me – Introduction

along the line
descending vertical
every fish
must swim

it is an idea
a requirement
that is immutable

along the line
every bird
must fly

it is an idea
a requirement
without speaking it

at the collision point

oh woe

oh me

what a mess
of scales
and feathers

but the need exists
and the law
and the fish
must fly
the bird
must swim
it’s a concept
you see
some kind
of big idea

and away they go
as they should
but with roles reversed
they are only
and a little

© Frank Prem 2018

Bachelard and me Poem #219: a cleansing flame

4 thoughts on “the scale-feather concept

  1. I don’t know why but I have just gone searching in my dvd library and YES found it. The three times I read this poem a very distinctive voice was actually reading it and it was the voice of Christopher Walken.
    Now read it again with him in mind. Really works.
    forgive me Frank I have been indoors all day :).

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