I saw a flight
of pelicans
rise
above my head
great boats
of the sky
the first
had one eye
on the path
they must take
the last
was watching the ground
one eye
on me
I was the flight
of pelicans
rising
over the water
above the trees
one eye
watched
the path we must fly
one eye
watched the ground
watched
over me
© Frank Prem, 2017
November 2017 Poem #31: the old man’s stock take
Excellent! 🙂
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Thanks Tom.
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“great boats of the sky” such an apt description. I love these birds.
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They’re magnificent, aren’t they?
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Indeed they are.
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Mr. Percilval , Mr. Proud, Mr. Ponder!!
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Sounds about right.
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I could recite the rest of the movie for you if you like 🙂
I honestly can not look at a pelican, even now after 40 years, and not think “Mr. Precival”
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I think I slept while it was doing the rounds. Have never seen it.
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I watched it enough for you. I don’t even know how I first got interested in it but I had two copies on VHS and the book (now have it on DVD). Still not sure why it had the effect on me it did but 12 years ago we even came through the Coorong on our honeymoon.
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Some pics get you like that. I went through the Coorong myself about 2 years back – only knew of it because of the story.
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We went through the town Colin Thiele lived in on the same trip. It’s kind of weird because I watched the first two Mad Max movies a hundred times and always loved the cars in them but it wasn’t the same going through Broken Hill/Silverton and seeing the MM museum as it was going through the Coorong.
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Cars have cold hearts I think.
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That’s true. When I was younger and used to fix cars I spent a lot of time in Wreckers yards and while every car told a story very few of them told warm stories.
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