shhh
shhha-shhha-shhherr
shhha-shhha-shhherr shhha-shhha-shhherr
shhha-shhha-shhherr
the wave sound
of a car
raising the tide
of the road
as it boats past outside
upon the street
shhha-shhha-shhherr
the sound moves
rocking both ways
up and down
lap and splash
like living in a grain
of the sand
spread on a beach
shhha-shhha-shhherr
shhha-shhha-shhherr shhha-shhha-shhherr
shhha-shhha-shhherr
and
sh-sh-sh
barely implied
a long way down the road
but I
magnify
what I hear
sh-sh-sh
then
suddenly
it goes completely quiet
and the only street sound
that is left
is the tinkle
of a twinkling of stars
fallen into water
© Frank Prem, 2017
October 2017 Poem #02: love (in a time of passing trains)
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I love the ending of this!
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Thanks Mick. I have a resonant street-scape outside my bedroom window. I love hearing the way the sound presents itself.
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Visual sound, though. I really do understand!
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It’s almost tactile.
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Reblogged this on O LADO ESCURO DA LUA.
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