Psychiatry 4: Acute Observations
sitting in the dining room
the back corner where he won’t get disturbed
he’s got a book of rules out
dictionary thesaurus and words
a world of words
he does so many pages a day
a genius at the triple-word plays
because he practices moves and combos
knows a little-used term to describe
a master scrabble player
that includes a q tile or maybe a j
he’s scored five hundred
he’s scored five-fifty
he’s scored on every play
in this game of ours
while I’m stuck
looking for a way to turn my tiles in
try to find better letters
maybe find a triple word he hasn’t claimed yet
but then
he really ought to be good for the big scores
he’s got the dictionary open
at eight in the morning
and anyway
it’s time for me to make my way to the meds room
to line up anti-psychotics in plastic cups
and then
a thesaurus won’t keep his eyes open
he’ll be sleeping
dreaming about big scores
about jousting in tournaments
about victory
in his room
non-compus
before a result is declared
© Frank Prem, 2009
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Hi Luiz.
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I see see the drugs being measured out. Scrabble I guess can be therapy?
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Yes, a diversionary activity. In the case of the chap in the poem, it was a grand obsession.
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🙂
I hope tardive dyskinesia isn’t part of the Scrabble words!
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Yep, and it was worth a few points, too.
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lol love it, great idea to connect past poems that use the prompt so aptly!
He has a lot in common with my sister, with scrabble … she doesn’t need the anti-psychotics 🙂
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I don’t know, Cate … scrabble players … you never can tell. Only kidding. Glad you liked the piece.
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lol no argument from me .. maybe I should slip her a few 😉
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Oh dear. She doesn’t cheat at Monopoly as well, I hope.
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oh no how did you guess … you must know her, have you met 😉
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They’re everywhere!
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arrgh sad about that …do her duplicates also lack insight?
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Actually, many of them are politicians and more senior managers
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yes she is also super ambitious … and the majority of those totally lack insight 😦
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Ah, those ambitious ones. I think I might have been one, once. It outgrew me.
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well thank heavens for that Frank, you had insight .. we can only pray they will one day!
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LOL. No insight at all, I don’t think. I just got left behind or overtaken. Then, I got old.
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lol don’t underestimate yourself!
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Not much risk there, but thank you.
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I find this an incredibly heart-rending poem, Frank. The medications seem worse than the condition at times. Now, they are giving them to people in aged care facilities. Truly, the world has gone mad!
I am so grateful that you are writing these stories. My grandmother was in one of those institutions for a time. Details seem to be lost in time. Something that is rarely talked about. I suspect she had post natal depression, and I’ve heard rumours of a great crime that she endured in her teens. For all that, she was an exceedingly talented pianist (OCD can be helpful at times) and by all accounts could have had a career in this area. But it was not to be , due to the war, family and hardship. I wish I knew her story. I’m sure your book will provide some insight into what it was like to have mental health issues for people of her generation.
I need to get your books in hard cover I’ve decided because I just can’t synthesise issues stories like yours from e-books. And because organisation is a challenge for me, it has occurred to me that it might just be faster if I drove to Beechworth to get them! We all have our foibles I guess. 🙄
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Incredibly difficult journeys for many clients of the system over the years. many hardship stories along the way – then and now.
I’ll have to try to organise an author visit and a few readings up Canberra way. There are a few folk from there, including yourself, who might be interested in coming along.
Failing that, though, wait a little until I get this next book in print and we can work out how to get you copies in paperback. I can do it via mail in Australia – and inscribe and sign them for you, as well. – Simple invoice with bank transfer details.
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I would definitely be interested in coming along, Frank. Happy to do a bank transfer when your new book comes out and get all three. At the moment I am Kindleless too. To quote my children quoting me, “It’s somewhere.”
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Tragic, Tracy!
That’s beaut. I’ll sort something out as soon as I have the book in hand.
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