it’s a big big note
explodes across the mutter
of audience
striking them
the so recognisable guitar
envelopes and quiets
speaks five notes

the keyboard
almost a whisper
against that powerful opening sound

then again
the guitar
those five notes
the audience is hushed

the spotlight focuses
on the guitar
not the man

five notes


it begins

© Frank Prem, 2003

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