Poem #7 from The Book of Evenings
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he must have been cold
for it is May
and there is no heat
in the descending sun
he stood
in the Bay
water above his knees
a short-handled garden spade
in his hands
and he shoveled
displacing water
in a regular rhythmic movement
forward and down
scoop and raise
over the shoulder
repeat
above him
a cloud-bank has formed lovers
engaged in a kiss
lingering
intact
as last ethereal wisps
perform an illusion of presence
all the while
stealing away secretly
until a moment when no kiss remains
they are gone
the sun is low
the water transformed
to cobalt
the shovel wielder too
is no longer there
his impact
as ephemeral as cloud
© Frank Prem 2003
The Book of Evenings Poem #8: special occasion
Another favourite. I loved the contrast of ethereal and mundane (and repeat motions, to boot) to way above his head, the clouds doing their thing. Lovely.
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Thanks Anita. I’ve always liked this piece, as well. Strange but marvelous how images come together.
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shoveling water …. what a lovely albeit strange, but not strange, image …. interesting piece here – has a wonderful quality ….
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Thanks Pat.
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Love your title, “digging water and kissing clouds.” It is lovely and fascinating. It was your title that drew me in and I enjoyed the entire piece, nicely written. Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you. Glad you enjoyed the piece. Thanks for dropping by.
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