he does his best work
in pencil
fabers
derwents
staedtlers
all serve him well
to sketch outlines
mark details
shade in shapes
with shadows
and he is drawing
a small tree
a eucalypt sapling
placed off-centre
in the bottom third
of a sheet
of cotton paper
the leaves are formed
vibrant
shade implies their colour
twisting as though
every single leaf is alive
foreground
beside
and just in front
is drawn
a large bucket container
a breeze ripple
shows it to be
quite full
tomorrow
he will draw more
background
animals
perhaps a line of rustic fencing
other detail
but that’ll be enough
for now
~
the trunk
catches his eye
at first sighting
consternation
the sapling appears
more
a young tree
the leaves are long and slender
low hanging
he can almost smell
the eucalypt oil
released under the warm of the sun
and he can’t understand
but
a matter he knows
he must attend to
replace the empty bucket
with a tank
drawn as full
as he can make it seem
~
it is magnificent
looks very much
a maturing redgum
the trunk is wide
and tall
reaching high
to the top of the sheet
they are a great big tree
and he can see
this one
is going to be
a beauty
so he takes down
the sheet
gentle
places it down
on the table
transparent paper tape
to abut one sheet
new
up against the other
seamless
almost seamless
no-one will ever
be able to tell
finds a new position
to accommodate the length
upon his easel
by tomorrow his tree
will be both sheets
complete
and so he executes
another sketch
placed in the foreground
he knows
you can never get
too much water
to a growing tree
~
he didn’t manage
to fully draw his picture
or the spill and shape
or the teeming
of his other ideas
but the tree
at a sheet and a half
is just about
one thought enough
and he can’t be sure
in the end
just how big
it might be
© Frank Prem, 2016
Poem #01 (January, 2017): time awareness
I can’t tell you why I like this poem so much, but I do. It makes me think that there is still time enough for all I want to do and become. Happy New Year. 🙂
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Happy New Year Meeks. There is still time enough.
See you next year.
F~
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Not long to go now. 🙂
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A fine ending to a good year. At least the portion I was privy to be to which zi can and will attest. A fine year of poetry, Frank. Happy New Year
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Michael, it’s been a pleasure to make acquaintance.
Let’s create again, next year.
See you then!
F~
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Happy new year to you too, Frank! Have an amazing year ahead 🙂
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And you too Aks. May your year be wonderful, also.
Be creative in all you do.
F~
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Thank you 🙂
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Ah, I thought of this as the process of composing a writing!
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Any big idea that gets out of hand, I think.
Glad you enjoyed the piece.
Cheers,
Frank
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Oh, and wishing you and yours a lovely, please, God, 2017.
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Thank you. Happy New Year to you and yours also.
Cheers,
Frank
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Wishing you and Leanne a happy and prosperous new year, Frank and look forward to another year of good stuff from you.
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Happy New Year to you too, Anita. May it be just a grand one.
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Thank you, Frank. It’s starting well, I have been asked to supply another poem to an anthology…so all’s good! I came on to check my mail before the festivities lol. And as you say, ‘cheer’s!
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Congratulations Anita. That’s marvelous.
F~
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Thank you.
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