there is a storm raging
across the heavens
I see the dark
destructive clouds
gather
swarm and rumble
wind gusts with the lash
of driven rain
I feel the cut
I wear the blows
and still I stand
I
in the temple
of my home
I stand
inside the doors
no room for storms
rage
rage
rage you loudly
amongst the night
and darkness
but I
am holding
to the flame
that shows me clear
who am I
and why am I
I can stand
against terrors
flashed white on black
across the heavens
for here
on solid ground
am I
© Frank Prem, 2016
Poem #32: shopping (every day)
A poem that speaks to me. The words flow beautifully.
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Thank you. I wasn’t planning to post this – not sure if it went where it should.
Glad I did, now.
Cheers,
Frank
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Well, I found it a poem that spoke to me for some reason. Excellent work if I may say so.
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I’m delighted. When writing I try to give myself up to the poem and I’m sometimes not sure where it has taken me or whether that is a valuable outcome or just another bit of writing.
Delighted this reads well for you.
Frank
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This poem is really good! Hope you will check my blog too.
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Thank you.
I’ll pop over for a visit.
Cheers,
Frank
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Thanks a lot !!
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this has a William Blake feeling to it — must be the “rage rage” bit – which works really well ….. this is multi-layered and fully rich, much like most storms as they build and brew, before breaking – glad that you did post this Frank 🙂
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Thanks Pat. I’m happy I posted it now, too.
Cheers,
Frank
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Great poem Frank, I really like this one.
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Thanks Fritz. It seems to have turned out better than I’d initially thought. I’m glad you like it.
Happy New Year, many more creations!
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Thanks Frank, same to you!
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I really like the feeling in this poem. Yes you are strong and on solid ground!
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Cheers, Dwight. From solid ground we’re in good control. Got to love that!
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Someone told me everyday above ground is a great day!! :>)
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