the chest has sagged
from when he last looked years ago
it’s tempting not to notice
but an urge to draw a breath and straighten
to reveal the mental shadow-shape
of the image he recalls is irresistible
the inevitable expulsion of air
obliterates fancied boundaries
to show full extent of slippage
and a visible quiver follows
pronouncing a pendulousness
that he thinks is reminiscent
of a woman’s breasts
it is lower though
where the paunch is stretched round
until a near-term shape is presented
that memory is harder to fool
for although with effort
the roundness will re-arrange
into the proportions of a mere bulge
it will no longer disappear
unless he is lying down flat
even then it would not be advisable
to snap a photograph for the picture
will show a torso vaguely familiar
but intimately unrecognisable
unless touched tentatively
with a searching finger
to sense a personal connection
the legs look well enough
their protests a silent and invisible ache
spread from calf to thigh
to lower back
to matters of weight and intake of rations
they would complain less perhaps
beneath a slightly smaller man
someone finer in physique
and have strength enough now
only for ever-shorter episodes
of carriage and journey
and imply a burdensome time to come
someone pronounced this middle age
but the thought never before occurred
to self-apply such a statement
a long looking-glass however
disengaged as it is from the artistry
of confabulation or outright lies
does not reflect fantasy
it shows only the distortions that it truly sees
enforces reluctant realisations
yes
he is indeed changed
from when he last looked
years ago
and the size and shape
of the mirrors in his bathroom
are now under active review
for all that a man of certain years requires
is the image of his face
to facilitate shaving
© Frank Prem, 2003
190218
Indeed! Thanks, I think, for the looking-glass protest.
Elouise
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You’re welcome. That was writ a few years back and I can assure you, the view hasn’t improved much. Still, you can’t have everything, so I’ll settle for food, wine and poetry.
Cheers,
Frank
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And the same to you!
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🙂
It would be wonderful if we could see ourselves psychologically without distortion… as a good mirror does in its own way.
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Not sure some of us would like what we saw Tom. A bit too revealing, perhaps.
Cheers,
Frank
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Love your style of writing 🙂 Thanks for the post!
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Thank you – that’s a lovely compliment. Delighted you’re enjoying the poems.
Cheers,
Frank
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Love it. But sitting requires no full length mirror, much to my body’s regret
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Sad, for sure. Glad you enjoyed the poem though. Cheers,
Frank
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I love the whimsical feel of the poem. Can’t take ourselves too seriously as we get older.
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Hi Thea. Lovely to see you here.
Yes, if I were to take myself seriously I’d be blubbering I think. Best to go with the flow.
Cheers,
Frank
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the legs look well enough
their protests a silent and invisible ache
spread from calf to thigh
to lower back
to matters of weight and intake of rations
This stanza really captures such an unspoken truth …. the entire piece is, umm …. quite the reflection on aging …. and I love how you’ve ended it – the last stanza ringing true for so many men, I would presume – at least of a certain age, once all the hullabaloo of the earlier young adult years have passed.
A pleasure to read Frank 🙂
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Thanks Pat. Yes, it all gets a bit too exciting for awhile, and then … ah well.
Cheers,
Frank
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LOL …. it’s much the same for women you know 😂 – just rare to read/hear a man’s perspective 🙂
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Sounds very familiar. A very clever poem Frank !
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Thank you, Sue. Glad you enjoyed. I’ve been trying to avoid them for awhile, now.
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Brilliant, Frank. I’m glad you got a chance to share this with us again. I looked at the date – 2003! Obviously a few more years has passed since you wrote that poem. I love the stanza, commencing with “Someone pronounced this middle age”.
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Tracy, it was quite an insight, at the time.
Now, of course, I’m a svelte young thing again. Marvelous the mirrors you can get these days …
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🙂
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